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PostSubject: Did you know that...   Sat May 03, 2008 10:33 am

Did you know that i write poetry to?


A moment of truth is what will be found,
Down in the garden with a lovely sound,
The sound of birds that sing to us,
Sit here silent and donít make a fuss.

These roses will grow, grow like the wind,
Then you will know that you have been sinned,
Sinned by god and sinned by his friend,
And after that it will never end.

These roses are red and to you I give,
This is where I hope you forgive,
Donít look back in to the past,
For you are the rose and with you it will last.

A rose is a flower that we all love,
And now we will know that youíre graced from above,
With your soul that is so kind,
It is you that has the gift one day you will find.

You touch us all with that gift that is yours,
This is why we walk through them doors,
These doors will take us to a place that we love,
Because it is you that give us that dream from above.

We dream at night when we close our eyes,
This is the feeling where you get first prize,
The prize is the rose that we all love,
With a lot of warmth that is true from above.


©2008 Tim Dobson. All Rights Reserved.
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PostSubject: Re: Did you know that...   Sat May 03, 2008 10:34 am

This is currently winning awards.
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PostSubject: Re: Did you know that...   Sat May 03, 2008 12:34 pm

I can see why it is winning awards KK, it is exceptional! We have another member here is another extraordinary poet, Lil' Turtle. Maybe she will post some of her works.
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PostSubject: Re: Did you know that...   Sun May 04, 2008 7:25 pm

I'm not a bragger....but i must admit...i wasn't too impressed

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PostSubject: Re: Did you know that...   Sun May 04, 2008 7:27 pm

why wasent you impressed?
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PostSubject: Re: Did you know that...   Sun May 04, 2008 8:16 pm

It was good...just a couple of verses could have flowed better...all in all a good poem though...I have some that aren't the best either..but I use a different style. Do you have others?

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